Eutopia: Indidivual Characters BG storie's

Post only if your character has been accepted, this is for refrencing, so that when we actually begin to write the story, we perform some sort of Melting pot, or Mosiac like story.

So please if you have an accepted character, give us a short to medium sized rundown of your characters BG story:


Allies:
Mamoru
to be posted soon..

Voldeshemit
to be posted soon...

Korah
A young boy, who lived in the town of Rich port,
Training to become a warrior, with his master Daisuke.
One fateful day, the Tyrant known as King Nergal came with a small force of solidiers
looking for one part of Firos Kattesai, the Blizzard blade.
Finding no luck with getting the people to reveal the whereabouts of the hidden blade.
He ordered the towns people killed and the town burned down.
Korah saw the flames from the dojo and attacked the king, but was struck down easily, his master tried the same thing, but was killed.
the King left frustrated the boy with ash.
Korah played dead just to make through the incident, he made it over to his quickly dying master, and who before he passed on, told him that he was the chosen weilder of the part of the Blizzard Blade.
after burying his master and locating the blade.
Korah swore revenge on the king for his family, master, and his village.

Anna
A young girl who grew up in a small village,
Anna inherited special healing powers from her mother, that could heal her or her friends of nearly any wounds.
Where she lived was peaceful and calm until the day of where war came upon the surrounding conutries,
her father was called to war.
Shortly after this, her father was killed, and a message was delivered to her home.
Her mother and her were devastated of this tragic event.
Soon the invaders, started targeting the village where she lived.
Her mother told her about the gift her father was going to give her.
A beuatiful black scythe, that had amazing powers.
Her mother told her to leave the village and find safe haven, before it was to late, if that they discovered her powers, that would surely take advantage of them.
So Anna ran away, dispite her sadness..

Deux
Deux woke up one morning in a clear grassy plains to blue skies, with absolutey no memory of anything of his past, or even his identity, until he stumbled on a odd looking book, with weird symbols in it.
suprisingly, he could read them without much struggle and as he did, he began to somethings about himself.
He was a NeoDammerus, people of a civilazation who had nearly created the perfect society, but as Deux went to go the sight of their great cities, they weren't there...
No ruins, nothing...
So began a quest to discover the cause of their disapearence and possibly found out if they lived.
Over 1000 years deux walked the earth, scanning it over completely for his answers.
Never being so lucky each time.

Nini
~I'll let her post it

Alli
Long ago, so long that any document that would have be written about the following would have crumbled into dust, there was a world with out a ruler. There was no ruler, because there was no need. Everyone, or most everyone, Help each other, never expecting anything in return. Of course those few powerful greedy souls that did not follow this way of life, wanted everything for themselves. Allitride was born into one particularly bad era of these villains. She wasn't the type that could fight such powerful begins, so she never dreamed about doing so, until the day she meet Samzuku Amadais. Sam was the type that would try to stop the villains at all costs. So Sam and Alli, unintentional at first, began to travel together always coming across some vile person of creature that needed stopping. For many years they did this and were dubbed "Heroes". Eventually Sam and Alli made their feelings known to each other and with their job slowing down, they settled down. They had one daughter, Kattrina. A few years and some months later Sam was called to war. Their was a freak accident, and Sam would never returned home. Alli's heart was broken, her love was dead. The only thing that keep her alive was her daughter. (And here is wear the story changes from my original.) But, all the evil she stopped before didn't particularly like her, and without Samzuku, Alli wasn't a major risk any more, so she was to be exterminated. In an effort to protect Kattrina, which the Villains didn't know about, Alli faked her death and went far away so they would never have to find out about Katt.

Alli wouldn't know what happened to Katt, but believes that since Katt was half elf, she would have the seemly infinite life span of a true elf. Alli spent her days helping here and there, out of sight, out of mind. Now she has a "Thieves Guild" of sorts, that helps those who need it, but never kills, which isn't always true, but is treated as treason to the guild. Alli is still a behind the scenes worker, so even the "Elven hands" doesn't know she is their leader... but that all could soon change.


Sam. E
To be posted soon..

Chozo
To posted soon...

Mochran
Mochran lived as a farm boy in Heltoran, S. Emilin. Upon his mother's death, he moved to live with his step father in Meleagor Deep. Upon the day of his arrival, the town was attacked by the Lich and his minions, who all served under a dark king named Emenzil, who was conquering the lands of Darania. Mochran, fleeing from the town, stumbled upon the Runesblade, sealed in an ancient clearing. He drew it out, and his life changed forever. It is now Mochran's task to save Darania from the evils of war and kill Emenzil in a final battle. Can he succeed? Or will he too fall to the darkness?
Battle Style: Mochran is a very clumsy swordsman, and prefers to attack with slower but more powerful attacks. More often, though, he uses the Runesblade's elemental magic to attack, as it is preferable to one-on-one combat.


Axis:

King Nergal
Ruler of all of Kona, the largest body of land on Terra Albsota.
the former king died of an unkown illness, and having no heirs or kin of his own, the power transfered to his General; Nergal.
But unlike the former king, Nergal was a greedy, cruel, cunning, and merciless ruler only wanting more power.
He not only has his sets on conquering the rest of the world, but on the legendary 8 soul blades.
He is incredbly powerful, and its not sure where his power comes from exactly...

DiStOrTiO
Formerly known as Distuo, Isuotek's Xenosis, best scientist in his quorom of the fifteen alchemist.
(Yes he's Neodammerian, like Deux)
One night, what appeared to be to falling violet star struck the earth near the instiute.
suprsingly no harm was done to the surroundings or anyone else for that matter.
But the grotestque rock held a deadly gift,
a voliet crystallic substance, that gave off a redish aura.
Distuo secretly began to experiment, with the crystals, even though the Isuotek forbade i, and for good reasons.
But when Distuo tried to experiment using Zengai to see what effetc it had the on the crystals.
The react was deadly. the crystal exploded and its aura poured into Distuo,
He cringed in absolute pain, as the foreighn aura quickly took over his body.
It corrupted his very appearence, but not only that..
His mind as well, and tokk the name as DiStOrTiO
In a suprise attack of mad rage, he attacked the city of Kharyabor.
None of the Neodammerai's most advanced weapons could take him down.
and he seemed indestructible.
Until...
Imperialix Norrenus, descended from his tower, and with his great mastery of Zengai, he banished DiS to a large isolated realm of darkness, and scattered matter.
The Great Abyss.
and so Dis spent a good 3000 years, mastering his power, plotting his escape and continueing a reign of pure destruction.
and so he did.
But he was weakened, and imperfect, yet still incredibly powerful.

Shimasu
Shimasu (japanese for mime) was a silent girl at school. She used mostly gestures to talk and only spoke when she could not convey a message with her hands. A straight A+ student Her expression always seemed blank and rumors would constantly spread about what she was actually thinking. She was constantly picked on because peopple assumed the reason she would talk to them was because she saw them below her. Shimasu never tried to stop the bullying and just endured it while maintaining her blank expression. Though in her mind she was getting tired of such a feeble world. She found life boring and the stupidity of humans unbearable. She decided she was going to take matters into her own hands and try to rebuild the world one step at a time. Now where would she find the means to do so. She waited until such a thing presented itself. She strolled into an antique shop one day noticing a rusty sword with engravings on it bound to a sash. She bought the sword and wiped of some of the dust and read the engravings. THe engraving said "Let the world be spared" and with this she took the sword and sash and wore it. Feeling the power of the sash and its capabilities. From there she had the ability to make anything she mimed real and unreal at her whim. And for such an occasion of rebuilding the world she got herself new attire as well. Loli boots for this one bro. WIth a white heel.

Jay
To be posted soon..

Sumizome
While fighting Sen Misurai, Sen's partner came, and Sumizome killed her. Sen, with the goddesses power, turned into an angel, his soul merged with his halberd right there. When Sumizome got stabbed by Sen's halberd a piece of the metal stayed in him. He aquired the power of the goddess, but with his twisted, evil soul, he bended his angel half of his race into a poisonous plasm, he lost his true human form. Now he has to use his never ending life force to keep his form, because of this state he can morph his body into any form. He used these powers along with his power of angels to earn him the nick-name "halfangelfreak". If he, himself touches any wound the enemy with said wound would get poisoned.


Emenzil
Emenzil, the king of Demons, and the dark ruler of Darania. 3 Centuries ago, he exploited the V'darnians and was able to enter the land of Darania, and brought his army of demons along with him. He conquered V'Darnia, and there, he plans his conquest for the entire world. Since then, with his dark armies, he has conquered all but two countries on the world. The prophecy of Itagel states that only Mochran could defeat him, but is Emenzil too powerful? Will he overpower Mochran in the final battle?
Battle Style: Emenzil has ultimate power and dark magic. He excells in both close combat, with his energy sword Xterrivia, and from far combat, with his ultra powerful dark magic. He can twist the souls of others and warp minds.

If i've missed anything.
just say so.

KAZECoyote wrote:I'll confirm him now because we only have 3 villains, but dont expect anything to get done anytime soon, im still working on the basic engine.

*Very loudly clears throat*

halfangelfreak wrote:

KAZECoyote wrote:I'll confirm him now because we only have 3 villains, but dont expect anything to get done anytime soon, im still working on the basic engine.

*Very loudly clears throat*

Who again, and provide a BG story pleez?

halfangelfreak wrote:

halfangelfreak wrote:Well, I'll submit Sumizome:
Pros: Has projectiles
Cons: Some attacks can be weird to work with.
Backstory:While fighting Sen Misurai, Sen's partner came, and Sumizome killed her. Sen, with the goddesses power, turned into an angel, his soul merged with his halberd right there. When Sumizome got stabbed by Sen's halberd a piece of the metal stayed in him. He aquired the power of the goddess, but with his twisted, evil soul, he bended his angel half of his race into a poisonous plasm, he lost his true human form. Now he has to use his never ending life force to keep his form, because of this state he can morph his body into any form. He used these powers along with his power of angels to earn him the nick-name "halfangelfreak". If he, himself touches any wound the enemy with said wound would get poisoned.
Weapon: Dark Halberd, made from his life-energy

Done

It's "Sumizome", not whatever you put. >.>

halfangelfreak wrote:It's "Sumizome", not whatever you put. >.>

Fixzed.

Umm Not to be a douche, or be demanding. But wouldn't it be smarter to choose less japanese names? Most of these characters aren't even japanese and makes almost no sense to have japanese names.

Well, Sumizome's the name, and I ain't changing it, because that's been my chars name for a long while, so I'm sticking to it, unless Kaze MAKES me change it.

Okay, I have no problem. Its just that i KNOW it will be a main critique of the game. People will throw the "Its a fanboy's anime" crap at it.

;_; How would it be fanboy if EVERYONE in it is original.

Besides: I don't even like anime, the only one I like is DBZ(I don't consider that anime), and Tales of the Abyss.

For later Melting Pot discussion:

Allitride, sounds exactly like

Alley tried.

That could help pronunciation, and be turned into a hilarious pun.

(In game, of course.)

Sumizone was accepted?

Anyways, why base the names of the groups off of WWII?
C'mon, be original here.

Mochran.
-Insert 300 page long backstory here-
I'll edit this post with the general spine of the story...later...tomorrow...when I'm not feeling lazy.

I didn't know Sam E. was going to be in the story in the first place; I thought he was just there for multiplayer, survival, settings, and tutorials.

itsameSMB wrote:I didn't know Sam E. was going to be in the story in the first place; I thought he was just there for multiplayer, survival, settings, and tutorials.

Okay then.
I r remove him then.

added:
Mochran-Ally

Emenzil-Axis

Well I see you used the very very short abriged character backstories. I guess it works over the entire story of the Black Citadel series to just have the two characters. I may add to it though.

<Na>Suliboy wrote:Well I see you used the very very short abriged character backstories. I guess it works over the entire story of the Black Citadel series to just have the two characters. I may add to it though.

Feel free to do so.