Eutopia *playable* Character submissons/suggestions

itsameSMB wrote:I wouldn't, because it doesn't make me want to dance.

[GDKN] wrote:

kosheh wrote:

[GDKN] wrote:the internet sounds like one of the most stupidest thing I ever heard.

Its like something unfunny thing you'd see in a low rated flash game on newgrounds.

okay GDKN

imagine SF3's Q
but more like Inspector Gadget with some random-ass mind-boggling appendages
and in his ending sequence he turns out to be a WOW-obsessed neckbeard who manages to score some huntress elf booty.

that's what the Internet should be.

like i said.

KAZECoyote wrote:

[GDKN] wrote:

kosheh wrote:

[GDKN] wrote:the internet sounds like one of the most stupidest thing I ever heard.

Its like something unfunny thing you'd see in a low rated flash game on newgrounds.

okay GDKN

imagine SF3's Q
but more like Inspector Gadget with some random-ass mind-boggling appendages
and in his ending sequence he turns out to be a WOW-obsessed neckbeard who manages to score some huntress elf booty.

that's what the Internet should be.

like i said.

Id rather use pencil sketch for someone like that, multiple weapons and wutnot, easy to sprite. he has a Eutopia sprite btw.

kosheh wrote:King Nergal: TBH, if he took his crown off while fighting and didn't stand so rigidly he'd look awesome.

kosheh wrote:Actually, if you want me to get picky about Korah, the only thing that I don't like about him is the way he holds his sword - it looks like it's incredibly cumbersome. When lifting the sword it's going to have him taking a few frames to do so, like Ike.
Also hypothetical situation - Korah's enemy could just put their foot on his sword and pin it to the ground . Even if it means half their leg freezing up, Korah would have difficulty lifting the blade from under their solid-planted foot and they'd have the opportunity to strike at his exposed midsection.
If he held the sword behind him, you'd be able to execute more attacks in less time because most of the animations would usually be having Korah swing the blade past his midsection and upward into the enemy's face, rather than him taking the blade, shift the weight behind him and then finally swinging the sword.

If Korah can hold the sword in one hand only while standing or jumping, do it. If not, it's not the end of the world but consider changing up the way Korah holds his sword. He could hold it two-handed during attacks for the sake of precision, but the sword really doesn't look particularly heavy, just long. >_>

kosheh wrote:

Deciton_Reven wrote:K, now tells us the individual reason each character looks lame.

Gladly!
Note I'm not looking at stats too seriously - which, most characters have rather generic ones. Most of the flaws are in character design; if you want to make a GOOD character you've got to get the courage to detach yourself from that character as much as possible - otherwise they'll turn into a Mary Sue and you'll become so paranoid that they won't be able to even throw a fireball without your permission if it means the characters gets hurt.

(i just saw while adding my post...lol, itsame)

Nini - looks too Angsty Sue with the "dark Nini" form.
Internet - pretty clever, but seems out of place in a game with blade-wielders and shirtless goth rockers. Seems a cross between "too good to leave out" and "slight godmod". You can balance out the Internet, but then he'd be incredibly underpowered!
Techdragon: He's a giant mechanical dragon. Why is he one of the fastest, more powerful characters?
The only way to make Techdragon work is as a giant, slow faux-final boss (a mini-boss, but still not THE final boss) with super armor. Then I could fight him all day and night.
Fire Blade: Generic. Wields a flaming sword. uhm
Jak: Cool character design (part skater, part Blues Brother) but he seems rather weak. If he's a water elemental and agility based what's he going to do, run across the stage shooting a water gun? >_>
Ben: He's the sword grabbing guy. I've seen this dude. Besides his stats (which look like he excels in agility while average in all else)
Okay, now look at his character design.
Chozo: Character design needs some work. I like how KFire's reppin' the Mulatto (usually it's white, black or ...Chun Li) but her backstory is too Spiderman-ish.
King Nergal: TBH, if he took his crown off while fighting and didn't stand so rigidly he'd look awesome.
Eriko: I like this character design somewhat, however she also has the Mary Sue problem. "i was teased all my life T__T but look at me now ^___^"
Itoya: OH GOD WHAT IS THIS POWER I WILL USE IT TO ATTACK THE NINJAS IN MY SCHOOL
Wristblades will also make for some really awkward attacks, being all he could possibly do is stab people by doing kung-fu-movie tiger paws
Mochran: Actually looks pretty good, just a little bland of an outfit. Maybe if he had a longer shirt-tail?
Chaos: A Gary Stu with DEMON WINGS AND A TAIL GRAAAAH
Lock: ...what? Any hit he takes is going to be a punch to the face!
Dracovirus: daschund dragon with internet breath :I
Chris: Uhm, a gambler. One day people are like KILL CHRIS and then Chris sees a SWOOORD and all of a sudden HE FIGHTS JAGUARS AND THEN AS A PRIZE HE HAS A ROBOTIC FACE
what? Also when you need prosthetics...uh, how on earth did he fight a pack of jaguars and win without being suddenly being unable to see, smell or hear? Unless he lost, then he's kind of a dope to just go and fight some lions for the hell of it.
Blaze: he's like all the bleach guys but with fire powers ):
Parker: a tracksuit shirt and jeans? :/ HI THIS IS THE FBI WE KILLED YOUR DAD
YOUR DAD WAS BAD
Living Shadow: ...I don't know what to say <_<
Glitch feels suspiciously like a Spiderman character. I'm not sure a Marvel character quite fits with the character designs in the game.
Grange looks pretty decent? That story, BEST NINJA EVER WENT TO HELL NOW THE DEVIL'S HIGH-RANKED ASSASSIN WHO SCOURS THE EARTH FOR A FIGHT
it's
what

Sam E. is...wow, really hard to criticize. xD He doesn't fit at all with the current cast of hardasses, has no backstory whatsoever and just...
he's a nerd, wtf. The only criticism is that I hear he's a character that "punishes for lag and messups", which pretty much describes any character in a fighting game.
Even in a game like Smash Bros., Ike can do that. It just depends on the player's skill <_<



But yeah, most of the issues are in character design - look at Korah, GDKN, and how eccentric their designs are. THAT'S how a character should look.
Most of these characters are wearing typical everyday highschooler clothing and wielding a giant sword, or an obvious sprite edit. Some aren't but they've got their own design issues.




and then everyone on Eutopia hated kosheh in just one post.

kosheh wrote:

[GDKN] wrote:the internet sounds like one of the most stupidest thing I ever heard.

Its like something unfunny thing you'd see in a low rated flash game on newgrounds.

okay GDKN

imagine SF3's Q
but more like Inspector Gadget with some random-ass mind-boggling appendages
and in his ending sequence he turns out to be a WOW-obsessed neckbeard who manages to score some huntress elf booty.

that's what the Internet should be.

kosheh wrote:

[GDKN] wrote:the internet sounds like one of the most stupidest thing I ever heard.

Its like something unfunny thing you'd see in a low rated flash game on newgrounds.

okay GDKN

imagine SF3's Q
but more like Inspector Gadget with some random-ass mind-boggling appendages
and in his ending sequence he turns out to be a WOW-obsessed neckbeard who manages to score some huntress elf booty.

that's what the Internet should be.

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

kosheh wrote:

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

~Chozo~ wrote:

kosheh wrote:Every character looks lame except Chozo lol

If there's no limit I'm gonna go ahead and sketch up a few characters. I'm no GDKN or Nini (?) but I've got like two characters in mind already.

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My comment didn't include the already approved characters - they're fine and that's why they're in the game x3

Oh...

Then I agree.

kosheh wrote:

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

~Chozo~ wrote:

kosheh wrote:Every character looks lame except Chozo lol

If there's no limit I'm gonna go ahead and sketch up a few characters. I'm no GDKN or Nini (?) but I've got like two characters in mind already.

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My comment didn't include the already approved characters - they're fine and that's why they're in the game x3

Nini wrote:looks too angsty? "dark" Nini? Wow, you obviously haven't read on her at all nor anything about it so what gives you the right to say ANYTHING at all ? really now. It's made to be a character in a constant conflict with her inner humanity. A struggle of identity and what defines being human. She is meant as a deeper character with an unstable emotional psyche that eventually settles into what she becomes through life experience and combat. Not meant to be a true hero nor villain. I'd go on but you (should) get the picture. Don't judge what you don't know please ~.~

Deciton_Reven wrote:

Spaghetti wrote:

Weapon: (nearly anything, but mainly a gun)
Strength: Short-Range Combat
Weakness: Long-Range Combat

Also, WTF is this? Uses a gun but is bad at long range fighting?

Spaghetti wrote:

Spaghetti wrote:Forget the Ben Meyer thing I posted. I got a better guy:

Parker Allen:

Bio: One day, when he was 15, Parker came home and saw a bunch of FBI agents there. They told Parker that his father was a spy and was killed...and that he was also an Axiem. The Axiem power was passed onto Parker and Parker, now 17 years old, works as a spy for the FBI, and goes through alot more than any other spy would.

10:

Strength:
Agility:
Resilience:
Stamina:

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Strength:
Agility:
Resilience:
Stamina:

Weapon: (nearly anything, but mainly a gun)
Strength: Short-Range Combat
Weakness: Dodging/Blocking Attacks.

Weight: heavy

Pic:


EDIT: Better animation: https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img11/669/parkerallenidleds4.gif

I forgot some stuff:

Pros:
Fast
Strong
Can jump high.

Cons:
Not very accurate
Can't block/dodge attacks very well
Creating an object takes time

kosheh wrote:

Nini wrote:looks too angsty? "dark" Nini? Wow, you obviously haven't read on her at all nor anything about it so what gives you the right to say ANYTHING at all ? really now. It's made to be a character in a constant conflict with her inner humanity. A struggle of identity and what defines being human. She is meant as a deeper character with an unstable emotional psyche that eventually settles into what she becomes through life experience and combat. Not meant to be a true hero nor villain. I'd go on but you (should) get the picture. Don't judge what you don't know please ~.~

oh okay
i'll be honest, I didn't read the entire bio. I can't sit down and read 11 pages of an RP character's story while I'm working on a term paper ;_;
I sort of assumed, you know
Nini
and Nini

Thanks for summarizing her personality, though!

so lemme get this straight.

it's a character who is having a sort of mental struggle with oneself
striving to accept who she is and her place in society.
she's a character who looks rather normal on the outside but is really emotionally messed up,
so through fighting and through her life experiences (which, for the duration of the game, is fighting!)
she goes through the duration of the game discovering herself and ends up accepts herself for who she is.
which would be a femme fatale born to kick ass?




As moving as the character sounds, I feel like I've heard this story before - questing to find out who she really is, deep down

Nothing wrong with that, just as long as 10 other characters don't strive to find their inner person <_<

Itsame: I just kinda trolled through a few pages to find out who/what/where. Now to look at the character who I apparently missed.

Deciton: You know, you could make Neox into a human. :0
It kinda spoils the character some but if they're really awesome they should transition just fine.

But yeah, I didn't see Anna in this topic for some reason. :{

kosheh wrote:
Mochran: Actually looks pretty good, just a little bland of an outfit. Maybe if he had a longer shirt-tail?

Luigimanman wrote:how do you know if you get in?

Deciton_Reven wrote:Can I request a character change? I think I want to switch out from Molly to Alli.

Spoiler:

Eriko Hemming wrote:Much appreciated , Thats not how I want her portrayed I'll keep my orignal thought up untill I write more in depth


Edit: I think the stats need to be looked over again , without trying to even everything up

kosheh wrote:

Eriko Hemming wrote:Much appreciated , Thats not how I want her portrayed I'll keep my orignal thought up untill I write more in depth


Edit: I think the stats need to be looked over again , without trying to even everything up

Actually you could remove any Mary-Sueness just by changing the character's name lol


Deciton: NOW I REMEMBER WHY I DIDN'T SAY ANYTHING, I HONESTLY REMEMBER READING THE POST


I really didn't have any comments to make on her tl;dr she's fine. The only thing I'm not crazy about is the awkward leg-positioning on the sprite and the hairstyle - hate sounding rude but her anatomy is quite off <_<




I have people (including KAZE) asking about my fan character; to submit it for ETW, but I've got to make some changes first because as-is he'd just end up being Sam E. (or Kosh E.?) so I'm gonna make a few modifications on the character to make him a little more suited for ETW's story.

He might be a little Gary-Stuish though because if I don't yeah Kosh E.

KAZECoyote wrote:

kosheh wrote:

Eriko Hemming wrote:Much appreciated , Thats not how I want her portrayed I'll keep my orignal thought up untill I write more in depth


Edit: I think the stats need to be looked over again , without trying to even everything up

Actually you could remove any Mary-Sueness just by changing the character's name lol


Deciton: NOW I REMEMBER WHY I DIDN'T SAY ANYTHING, I HONESTLY REMEMBER READING THE POST


I really didn't have any comments to make on her tl;dr she's fine. The only thing I'm not crazy about is the awkward leg-positioning on the sprite and the hairstyle - hate sounding rude but her anatomy is quite off <_<




I have people (including KAZE) asking about my fan character; to submit it for ETW, but I've got to make some changes first because as-is he'd just end up being Sam E. (or Kosh E.?) so I'm gonna make a few modifications on the character to make him a little more suited for ETW's story.

He might be a little Gary-Stuish though because if I don't yeah Kosh E.

Wait what?

halfangelfreak wrote:Well, I'll submit Sumizome:
Pros: Non-generic villain. Uses Halberd, for variety in weapons.
Cons: How would you make Half-angel form fit in with the game?
Backstory:While fighting Gold Misurai, Gold's partner came, and Sumizome killed her. Gold, with the goddesses power, turned into an angel, his soul merged with his halberd right there. When Sumizome got stabbed by Gold's halberd a piece of the metal stayed in him. He aquired the power of the goddess, but with his twisted, evil soul, he bended his angel half of his race into a poisonous plasm, he lost his true human form. Now he has to use his never ending life force to keep his form, because of this state he can morph his body into any form. He used these powers along with his power of angels to earn him the nick-name "halfangelfreak". If he, himself touches any wound the enemy with said wound would get poisoned.
Weapon: Dark Halberd, made from his life-energy